Crit Feedback
Within my crit group, we discussed how I could move my project further and develop my ideas. I got some good feedback and suggestions on what I could do next for the final piece:
Simplify collages by zooming in on sections
Redraw sticker ideas more childishly
Make stickers simpler with the separate parts of the devil, e.g. horns/tail
Create symbols for the 5 sections of the caste system
Make a poster with 5 layers shaped to represent the castes
Draw abstract forms
Horns/eyes from the devil on a razor?
Look at more cartoon devils
5 blade razors to represent the 5 castes?
Try close ups of people's skin; the 5 castes
When collaging, create it by hand
I am now going to explore these suggestions in order to strengthen my project and poster series. An initial idea that I have gained from the crit is to add a childish element to my illustrations; I realised I could possibly convey this through drawing somewhat unorthodoxly on Microsoft Paint?
I am now going to explore these suggestions in order to strengthen my project and poster series. An initial idea that I have gained from the crit is to add a childish element to my illustrations; I realised I could possibly convey this through drawing somewhat unorthodoxly on Microsoft Paint?
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