Essay feedback
- Improve the introduction; consider the context of the ideas discussed in this. Focus more on contemporary design and satire and meme culture within graphic design specifically.
- Make sure all the references used in the essay are relevant to graphic design; cut out the Simpsons section as TV isn't really comparable to contemporary graphic design
- Look at more examples like Crack Up Crack Down
- Avoid making references to TV feeling like a main focus
- Make the essay more analytical rather than descriptive; look at the paragraphs where I provide context and relate them back to the question
- Consider the triangulation of my ideas; go back and compare examples more to provide more of an argument
Next steps
I want to make these improvements to my essay in order to help guide my practical outcome more. In order to do so, I think I'm going to go back and reorganise and cut sections out to make the writing more analytical rather than descriptive. My main focuses now are to do this, carry out more reading into examples that relate directly to satire and meme culture in graphic design, and write my conclusion. I hopefully aim to do this just before Christmas, as I want to focus on the practical to ensure it aligns with the points made in my essay.
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