Crit notes

CRIT/ MEETING

• Figure out how the type can make it look more punk 
• Play around with the legibility
• Look at classic punk typography
• Bring out the whitewash more; good concept as it relates to censorship
• Oliver Pitt 
• Mouldmap
• The crazy texture stuff works well at creating an uneasy feeling; keep using these textures
• The blocky futuristic text looks too futuristic; need to use more handmade text
• The 3D mapping/ hand drawn text works well; looks really strange and reflects the idea of post punk being a modified version of punk
• Think about the flag