Friday, 27 March 2020

Crit feedback for business cards/ stickers


Crit notes


Because of the chaos that is coronavirus, I found myself stuck without feedback on my PPP work, so got a few peers to crit what I have so far online. This will hopefully help me try different things with the sticker/ business card concept, as working from home can often make the design process repetitive. Here is a list of what a few people said:

  • I like the bright colours and the texture on the business cards; try differing the colours for each artist to make each one unique, maybe take colours from their work?
  • Not keen on the gapping on the business cards of the tex, try different alignments?
  • Take the sticker designs further by adding text? Especially to the aims ones
  • Try more editing with the stickers e.g. gradients/ halftones
  • Could you have each sticker in a variety of shapes that relate to the artists? Make them more individual
  • Stick to the WordArt approach 
  • Try using some really naff holographic paper effect on the stickers - like the star stickers you get in primary school
  • Have fun with it and push how far you can to make it look rubbish
  • Take the colours from the artists; but unite them with a motif?

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